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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">FYI, here are the consolidated comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">My comments have a * prefixing the ones that are CFP related (I didn’t separate them out from the regular C review). Please let me know if I missed anything or if anyone disagrees/has comments.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">If I don’t hear back from anyone, I will post these to the WG14 editorial review group (removing the names) by this Friday.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red">Rajan:<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Comment 9: Footnote 45). Change to "Two types *do not have to* be identical..."<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Footnote 52). Change to "type *is not necessary to* be performed..."<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Footnote 69). Change to "thus may convert to different internal formats and values."<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Footnote 215). Change to "do not have to support;"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Footnote 236). Change to "errno does not have to be"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Footnote 309). Change to "implementation does not have to provide"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Footnote 312). Change to "implementation does not need to distinguish"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Footnote 318). Change to "identifiers do not need to be modifiable"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Footnote 346). Change to "this does not have to be the same"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> Footnote 387). Change to "and the value does not have to be negative."<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Comment 64: 6.7.3.3#20. Change "Now, consider a similar fragment, ..." to "A similar fragment, ..."<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Comment 125: *5.1.2.4#13. Change to "of a register can not alter the value."<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> *5.1.2.4#13. Change to "load rounds to the precision"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> *5.1.2.4#13. Change to "assignments perform their"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> *5.2.5.3.2#36. Change to "constants could possibly not give".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 6.5.3.6#12. Change to "literal have to be constant".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 6.7.2#20. Change to "specifier can have".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 6.7.13.8.2#3. Change to "definition can for example".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> *6.7.13.8.3#8. Change to "the result can depend on"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 6.10.4.1#17. Change to "can violate the constraint"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 6.10.4.2#7. Change to "violation since an environment that has a CHAR_BIT greater than 24 could possibly not get enough data from the resource."<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 6.10.4.2#8. Change to "implementations that could have an".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 7.21.1#5. Change to "Implementations can diagnose".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt">Comment 185: 5.1.2.5#24. Change to "evaluation can take".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 5.1.2.5#38. Change to "shared memory location possibly will not preserve".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 6.2.6.2#5. Change to "bits could generate".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> *6.4.4.3#12. Change to "rounding can yield"<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 6.7.2#19. Change to "can cause constraint".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 6.7.13.8.1#10. Change to "call can be safely".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 6.7.13.8.1#10. Change to "the reordering can, in principle,".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 6.7.13.8.3#4. Change to "attribute can depend".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 7.24.3.4#3. Change to "implementation can ignore".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 7.24.3.4#4. Change to "call could possibly not be passed".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 7.24.3.5#3. Same as 7.24.3.4#3.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> 7.24.3.5#4. Same as 7.24.3.4#4.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> *F.5#6. Valid use of "shall". Keep as is unless we have a good alternative ("will"?).<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> *F.10.12.1. Change to "that could potentially not be supported".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> *F.10.13.1. Same as F.10.12.1.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt"> *H.2.4#4. Change to "type could have the same".<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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page 43, footnote 45<br>
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page 62, footnote 69<br>
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page 323, footnote 312<br>
page 329, footnote 318<br>
page 365, footnote 346<br>
page 415, footnote 387<br>
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459, 625, 674.<br>
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Do not like that the page footers no longer have the clause number.<br>
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It is not clear to me when "family" should be in an index entry:<br>
Page 689: canonicalize has family, while cacos does not.<br>
Page 708, index entry "strfromd 358" should be "strfromdN 358"<br>
Page 708, index entry "strtod 360, 361" should be "strtodN 360, 361"<br>
Page 708, index entry "wcstod 435, 436" should be "wcstodN 435, 436"<br>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red">Jim:<o:p></o:p></span></b></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">From reviewing the titling, numbering and referencing of tables in the C23 editorial review draft, I have the following additional comments.<span style="font-size:11.0pt"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">5.2.5.3.4 #11, a note, just above Table 5.2. A footnote in the previous draft was turned into this note. The footnote was attached to the last sentence of the paragraph preceding the note. As a note, it’s not clear what “these cases” refers
to. Suggest reverting back to the footnote. An alternative fix would be changing the note to: "Although unspecified in ISO/IEC 60559, a preferred quantum exponent of 0 would be a reasonable implementation choice for the cases where the formula is undefined
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">AT035</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">**- 038</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">Still a hanging paragraph in F.10 (not mentioned in comment). Fixing it would change Annex F subclause numbers for all the math functions. Suggest no change for
C23.</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">Still a hanging paragraph in H.11 (not mentioned in comment).</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">** -046</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">** -068</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">** -069</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">The first change also replaced a semicolon with a period (preceding “Implementations conforming to Annex F have this behavior”). The semicolon made it clearer
what “this behavior” refers too. Suggest restoring the semicolon.</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">Otherwise ok.</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">GB3 3- 078</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">** -085</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">H.11.3.2.3, last line, is “See EXAMPLE in H.11.3.3.2.” I believe ISO style would be “See Example in …” or “See the example in …”. </span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">GB5 3- 104</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">GB5 4- 105</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">Ok</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">There’s a bad line break right after the top line of the 7.6.3 Synopsis box.</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">There’s a space at the beginning of the 4<sup>th</sup> line of 7.6.3 #2. </span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"> <o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">In the end of 7.23.6.2, in Forward references, the 2<sup>nd</sup> line begins with a comma “,”.</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">GB6 8- 121</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">** -128</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">GB7 2- 134</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">GB7 9- 142</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">GB7 6- 143</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">The breaks in the tables are awkward. I assume the entire tables won’t fit the page width. Adding a title for the second part of each table would be helpful,
e.g. “Table H.1 (continued)”, which is what ISO suggests for tables that must be continued on another page. There’s a lot of space between the two parts of the tables.</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">GB9 9- 155</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">GB8 9- 165</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">GB8 8- 166</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">GB8 7- 167</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#FF2600">Didn’t check 146 - 167 above, which refer to the Annexes and Annex J.</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">GB9 2- 175</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">GB9 1- 176</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">Ok regarding comment resolution, but ...</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">Don’t “TS 18661-<i>n</i>” need to be written as “ISO/IEC TS 18661-<i>n</i>”?</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">CFP and WG14 work referred to TS 18661-4a, but the “4a” doesn’t appear on any published document. The “a” doesn’t seem necessary because the bullet says “mathematical
functions” which points to the feature that was integrated. Suggest omitting the “a”. Also, TS 18661-4 2<sup>nd</sup> edition is expected to publish at about the same time as C23, which means an undated reference to TS 18661-4 would be wrong (the new one doesn’t
include the mathematical functions). Suggest using dated references to the TSes:</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">ISO/IEC TS 18661-1:2014</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">ISO/IEC TS 18661-2:2015</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">ISO/IEC TS 18661-3:2015</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif;color:#C00000">ISO/IEC TS 18661-4:2015</span><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif"><o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-family:"Calibri",sans-serif">**- 189</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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