<html><head><meta http-equiv="content-type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="overflow-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;">In response to email comments about N3163 (TS-4) I received from Robert Secord, I’d like to suggest the editorial changes below.<div><br></div><div>- Jim Thomas<br><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>In N3163 (TS-4) …</div><div><br></div><div>Page vi, line 9 </div><div>Change “floating-point arithmetic, equivalent to” to “floating-point arithmetic, which is equivalent to”.</div><div><br></div><div>Page vi, line 14</div><div>Change “unbounded tower of wider formats” to “unbounded sequence of wider formats”.</div><div><br></div><div>Page vi, line 41</div><div>Change “in recognition of the fact that” to “recognizing that”.</div><div><br></div><div>Clause 6</div><div><i>The draft currently refers to "member(s)” of the array. C23 has 10 instances of “elements of the array” and 6 instances of “members of an array”. IEC 60559 uses “element”. All instances of “member” in Clause 6 refer to member/element of an array.</i></div><div>Replace all instances of “member” with “element”.</div><div><br></div><div>Page 15, line 36</div><div>Change “in 7” to “in Clause 7”.</div><div><br></div><div>Page 17</div><div>Update the Bibliography to include all appropriate references.</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>In N3164 (TS-5) …</div><div><br></div><div><i>The changes above for TS-4 pages vi and 17 also apply to TS-5.</i></div><div><br></div><div><div>Page vi, line 9 </div><div>Change “floating-point arithmetic, equivalent to” to “floating-point arithmetic, which is equivalent to”.</div><div><br></div><div>Page vi, line 14</div><div>Change “unbounded tower of wider formats” to “unbounded sequence of wider formats”.</div><div><br></div><div>Page vi, line 41</div><div>Change “in recognition of the fact that” to “recognizing that”.</div></div><div><br></div><div>Page 23</div><div><div>Update the Bibliography to include all appropriate references.</div></div><div><br></div><div><br></div></div></body></html>