<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><br class=""><div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Aug 14, 2022, at 11:59 PM, Mike Cowlishaw <<a href="mailto:mfc@speleotrove.com" class="">mfc@speleotrove.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class="">
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<div dir="ltr" align="left" class=""><span class="954214106-15082022"><font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Arial" class="">Re hyphens, the first of these (<font color="#0070c0" size="3" face="Calibri" class="">7.23.6.1#20 </font>) in not a case of this: in code/macros
(or in that case, characters produced by a printf) are indeed hyphens. The
ASCII code 45 (hex 2D) is a hyphen [see: <a href="https://www.ascii-code.com/" class="">https://www.ascii-code.com/</a>].</font></span></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br class=""></div>Got it. I will remove that one.<br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class=""><div style="WORD-WRAP: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space" class="">
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<div dir="ltr" align="left" class=""><span class="954214106-15082022"><font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Arial" class="">The other case (<font color="#0070c0" size="3" face="Calibri" class="">H.3#6
2nd sentence</font>) does need fixing (and also a
space).</font></span></div>
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<div dir="ltr" align="left" class=""><span class="954214106-15082022"><font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Arial" class="">There are several uses of hyphen in the section I reviewed
(5.2.4.2.3), in macros (e.g., 'minimum exponent').</font></span></div>
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<div dir="ltr" align="left" class=""><span class="954214106-15082022"><font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Arial" class="">Separately, I just noticed that in the list my comments don't
specific which section they refer to (5.2.4.2.3) -- probably because I
only put that, and incorrectly(!), in the Subject of my e-mail
2516. I suggest adding the section number to the
list.</font></span></div></div></div></blockquote><div><br class=""></div>I’ve added section numbers to your comments.</div><div><br class=""></div><div>- Jim<br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class=""><div style="WORD-WRAP: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space" class="">
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[<a href="mailto:cfp-interest-bounces@oakapple.net" class="">mailto:cfp-interest-bounces@oakapple.net</a>] <b class="">On Behalf Of </b>Jim
Thomas<br class=""><b class="">Sent:</b> 15 August 2022 00:24<br class=""><b class="">To:</b>
CFP<br class=""><b class="">Subject:</b> [Cfp-interest 2533] Re: CFP review comments on C23
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<div class=""></div>I suggest adding the following two comments:
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<div class=""><div class="MsoNormal"><font face="Calibri, sans-serif" class=""><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: rgb(0,112,192)" class="">JT-110 throughout Check that a
hyphen is not used where a minus sign is needed. For example, 7.23.6.1#20
exponent signs and H.3#6 2nd sentence. </span><font color="#ff4013" class=""><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14px; caret-color: rgb(0, 112, 192)" class="">This</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt" class=""> expands on Mike</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14px" class="">’</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt" class="">s first
comment.</span></font></font></div><div class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: Calibri, sans-serif; COLOR: rgb(0,112,192)" class="">JT-111
7.12.17 In several places in the subclauses it appears space is needed in
front on a relational operator, e.g. in 7.12.17.1 #2.<o:p class=""></o:p></span></div><div class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: Calibri, sans-serif" class=""><br class=""></span></div><div class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: Calibri, sans-serif" class="">I </span><font face="Calibri, sans-serif" class=""><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14px; caret-color: rgb(0, 112, 192)" class="">expect these kinds of
things will be cleaned up by JeanHeyd else by the ISO editor, but it seems
better to mention them.</span></font></div><div class="MsoNormal"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: Calibri, sans-serif" class="">-
Jim</span></div></div>
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<div class="">On Aug 12, 2022, at 5:36 PM, Jim Thomas <<a href="mailto:jaswthomas@sbcglobal.net" class="">jaswthomas@sbcglobal.net</a>>
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Jim: Will make judgment calls on the rest and send it to the
group for review for final sending to WG14 on
Monday.<o:p class=""></o:p></div></blockquote></div>
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<div class="">Here’s the list of commeents for CFP review:</div>
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<div class="">- Jim Thomas</div>
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