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<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=954214106-15082022><FONT color=#0000ff
size=2 face=Arial>Re hyphens, the first of these (<FONT color=#0070c0 size=3
face=Calibri>7.23.6.1#20 </FONT>) in not a case of this: in code/macros
(or in that case, characters produced by a printf) are indeed hyphens. The
ASCII code 45 (hex 2D) is a hyphen [see: <A
href="https://www.ascii-code.com/">https://www.ascii-code.com/</A>].</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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size=2 face=Arial></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=954214106-15082022><FONT color=#0000ff
size=2 face=Arial>The other case (<FONT color=#0070c0 size=3 face=Calibri>H.3#6
2nd sentence</FONT>) does need fixing (and also a
space).</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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size=2 face=Arial></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=954214106-15082022><FONT color=#0000ff
size=2 face=Arial>There are several uses of hyphen in the section I reviewed
(5.2.4.2.3), in macros (e.g., 'minimum exponent').</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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size=2 face=Arial></FONT></SPAN> </DIV>
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<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=954214106-15082022><FONT color=#0000ff
size=2 face=Arial>Separately, I just noticed that in the list my comments don't
specific which section they refer to (5.2.4.2.3) -- probably because I
only put that, and incorrectly(!), in the Subject of my e-mail
2516. I suggest adding the section number to the
list.</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<DIV dir=ltr align=left><SPAN class=954214106-15082022><FONT color=#0000ff
size=2 face=Arial>Mike</FONT></SPAN></DIV>
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<FONT size=2 face=Tahoma><B>From:</B> Cfp-interest
[mailto:cfp-interest-bounces@oakapple.net] <B>On Behalf Of </B>Jim
Thomas<BR><B>Sent:</B> 15 August 2022 00:24<BR><B>To:</B>
CFP<BR><B>Subject:</B> [Cfp-interest 2533] Re: CFP review comments on C23
draft N3047<BR></FONT><BR></DIV>
<DIV></DIV>I suggest adding the following two comments:
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<P class=MsoNormal><FONT face="Calibri, sans-serif"><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; COLOR: rgb(0,112,192)">JT-110 throughout Check that a
hyphen is not used where a minus sign is needed. For example, 7.23.6.1#20
exponent signs and H.3#6 2nd sentence. </SPAN><FONT color=#ff4013><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 14px; caret-color: rgb(0, 112, 192)">This</SPAN><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt"> expands on Mike</SPAN><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 14px">’</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt">s first
comment.</SPAN></FONT></FONT></P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: Calibri, sans-serif; COLOR: rgb(0,112,192)">JT-111
7.12.17 In several places in the subclauses it appears space is needed in
front on a relational operator, e.g. in 7.12.17.1 #2.<O:P></O:P></SPAN></P>
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style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: Calibri, sans-serif"><BR></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: Calibri, sans-serif">I </SPAN><FONT
face="Calibri, sans-serif"><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 14px; caret-color: rgb(0, 112, 192)">expect these kinds of
things will be cleaned up by JeanHeyd else by the ISO editor, but it seems
better to mention them.</SPAN></FONT></P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN
style="FONT-SIZE: 11pt; FONT-FAMILY: Calibri, sans-serif">-
Jim</SPAN></P></DIV>
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<DIV>On Aug 12, 2022, at 5:36 PM, Jim Thomas <<A
href="mailto:jaswthomas@sbcglobal.net">jaswthomas@sbcglobal.net</A>>
wrote:</DIV><BR class=Apple-interchange-newline>
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<DIV style="WORD-WRAP: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space">Action item:
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Jim: Will make judgment calls on the rest and send it to the
group for review for final sending to WG14 on
Monday.<O:P></O:P></DIV></BLOCKQUOTE></DIV>
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<DIV>Here’s the list of commeents for CFP review:</DIV>
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<DIV><SPAN class=Apple-tab-span style="WHITE-SPACE: pre"></SPAN><A
href="https://wiki.edg.com/pub/CFP/WebHome/CFP_comments_on_N3047-20220812.b.pdf">https://wiki.edg.com/pub/CFP/WebHome/CFP_comments_on_N3047-20220812.b.pdf</A></DIV>
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<DIV>- Jim Thomas</DIV>
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