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<p class="MsoNormal">Clause 4#7:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> "and the strto * floating-point" -> "and the strto* floating-point"<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> (There should be no space between the strto and the *)<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">7.24.1.3#2<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> Missing end of paragraph line saying "Use of these functions with any other format string results in undefined behavior." from published part 1.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> Note that it is present in 7.24.1.4#2 though does not say the non-negative part in #3 (which was not in published part 1).<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">7.24.1.5#3 last bullet:<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> Seems to have the grammar term "n-char-sequence:" on the same line instead of a new line.<o:p></o:p></p>
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C/C++ Compiler Development<o:p></o:p></p>
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<b>Date: </b>Thursday, August 4, 2022 at 10:26 PM<br>
<b>To: </b>Mike Cowlishaw <mfc@speleotrove.com>, Damian McGuckin <damianm@esi.com.au>, Rajan Bhakta <rbhakta@us.ibm.com>, "Fred J. Tydeman" <tydeman.fred@gmail.com><br>
<b>Cc: </b>CFP <cfp-interest@ucbtest.org><br>
<b>Subject: </b>[EXTERNAL] Fwd: Editorial review<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" style="mso-line-height-alt:.75pt"><span style="font-size:1.0pt;color:white">Fred, Rajan, Mike, and Damian, thanks for volunteering to help with the C23 CD draft review. Others may yet volunteer to review parts of the draft or review our
comments. Please find a link to the draft at the bottom of David Keaton’s message
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<p class="MsoNormal">Fred, Rajan, Mike, and Damian, thanks for volunteering to help with the C23 CD draft review. Others may yet volunteer to review parts of the draft or review our comments. Please find a link to the draft at the bottom of David Keaton’s message
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<p class="MsoNormal">For all reviewers, let's review our comments at the next CFP meeting on Friday, August 12, to decide which ones to submit to WG14 now (by Monday, August 15) and which to put on the CFP errata list for the next C revision. As you find errors
please email them to <a href="mailto:cfp-interest@ucbtest.org">cfp-interest@ucbtest.org</a>.<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal">- Jim Thomas<o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue"">From: </span></b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue"">David Keaton <<a href="mailto:dmk@dmk.com">dmk@dmk.com</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue"">Subject: Editorial review</span></b><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue"">Date: </span></b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue"">August 4, 2022 at 4:47:25 PM PDT</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue"">To: </span></b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue"">Aaron Ballman <<a href="mailto:aaron@aaronballman.com">aaron@aaronballman.com</a>>, Rajan Bhakta <<a href="mailto:rbhakta@us.ibm.com">rbhakta@us.ibm.com</a>>,
Alex Gilding <<a href="mailto:agilding@perforce.com">agilding@perforce.com</a>>, Jens Gustedt <<a href="mailto:jens.gustedt@inria.fr">jens.gustedt@inria.fr</a>>, Joseph Myers <<a href="mailto:joseph@codesourcery.com">joseph@codesourcery.com</a>>, Miguel Ojeda
<<a href="mailto:miguel.ojeda.sandonis@gmail.com">miguel.ojeda.sandonis@gmail.com</a>>, Robert Seacord <<a href="mailto:rcseacord@gmail.com">rcseacord@gmail.com</a>>, Jim Thomas <<a href="mailto:jaswthomas@sbcglobal.net">jaswthomas@sbcglobal.net</a>>, "Fred
J. Tydeman" <<a href="mailto:tydeman@tybor.com">tydeman@tybor.com</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue"">Cc: </span></b><span style="font-family:"Helvetica Neue"">JeanHeyd Meneide <<a href="mailto:phdofthehouse@gmail.com">phdofthehouse@gmail.com</a>>, Freek Wiedijk <<a href="mailto:freek@cs.ru.nl">freek@cs.ru.nl</a>></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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<p class="MsoNormal"> Thanks to everyone who volunteered to serve as editorial reviewers for the draft C standard before it is sent for CD ballot. I've attached the latest draft of the standard and the editor's report.<br>
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I've appended "_draft" to the filenames because there is a chance they will get new document numbers, but they will probably end up with the ones in the filenames. In any case, these are the files to review.<br>
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The primary purpose is to find out if the most recent changes to the draft match the documents that were voted into the standard. If you happen to notice anything editorial that needs correcting while looking at that, please do mention it. However making
sure the draft matches the papers that were voted in takes priority.<br>
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While doing this, if you notice any other non-editorial errors, feel free to report them. Depending on what they are, we might send another cycle through WG 14, or we might want them to be addressed with NB comments. However, again, making sure the draft
matches the voted-in papers is more important. There will be plenty of time to review other things during the CD ballot.<br>
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Thanks again for volunteering. I would appreciate it if you would have all your comments in by the end of Monday, August 15, after which there will be some editing time, and then the CD ballot.<br>
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David<o:p></o:p></p>
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Meneide, Editor's Report (Committee Draft Ballot)<br>
</span><a href="https://www.open-std.org/jtc1/sc22/wg14/www/docs/n3047.pdf"><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif;color:#0563C1">N3047</span></a><span style="font-size:13.5pt;font-family:"Times New Roman",serif"> 2022/08/04
Meneide, Working Draft (Committee Draft Ballot)</span><o:p></o:p></p>
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