[Cfp-interest 2515] JT-024 through JT-069, JT-098, JT-099 comments on N3047

[Jim Thomas]

I previously sent comments JT-024 through JT-069 to the editor pertaining to Annex H in the pre-N3047 C23 draft (see Cfp-interest 2514). Many of those comments have been addressed in N3047. Below are the comments that still pertain to N3047, together with a few more related comments.

- Jim Thomas
 
JT-028.1 H.3#3 In the text for N and N + 1, a comma is needed between “type” and “evaluate”. as in H.3#2. 


JT-029 H.3#6: Remove the line “The macro”.

 

JT-030 H.3#6, 2nd sentence: The spacing around the “-“ symbol looks wrong.

 

JT-032 H.9 and throughout: I don’t understand the color scheme, but some things seem inconsistent. For example, in 7.3.5 in cacosfNx the “x” is part of the function name so should have the same color as “cacosf”.  Similarly, in _FloatNx the “x” is part of the type name so should have the same color as “_Float”. Is the coloring still in progress? There are further comments about color, where it seems obviously wrong, but my review of color is spotty.

JT-032.1 throughout (This comment elaborates on JT-032) In the “Nx” and “NX” suffixes for types, functions, and macros the “x” and “X” should have the same typeface and as the unsuffixed name. It is only the “N” that is template. Note that the typefaces in the similar “Mx” and “MX” prefixes are correct, e.g. in the macros in H.11.1#5 and in the 7.12.14 functions

 

JT-050 H.11.3.1.1#2 and #3: The “N” in encodefN is not italicized (both paragraphs).

 

JT-051 H.11.3.1.2#2 and #3: The “N” in decodefN is not italicized (both paragraphs).

 

JT-052 H.11.3.2.1#2: The “M” and “N” in fMencfN are not italicized.

 

JT-053.1 H.11.3.2.1#2: The “N” in “encNptr" should not be bold.



JT-054.1 H.11.3.2.2#2: In the first sentence, the “M” and “N” in the two function names are not italicized. In three instances in the paragraph the type size indicator “N” is bold.

 

JT-056 H.12: In many instances in the subclauses of H.12 the type size indicator “N” appears to be bold.

 

JT-059 H.12.3.1: In the heading, there is a space before the “N” in the function name.

 

JT-063 H.12.4: In the first sentence “N” is not italicized.

  

JT-098 H.12.4.2#2: Looks like a space is missing in the first sentence in “strtoencbindNfunctions”. 



JT-099 H.13#6: In the last table “undefined” in the second column should be moved down to be on the same line as fmul(dc, d) in the first column.
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